Friday, April 8, 2011

Independent Reading

By Monday 5/16, you need to post to this blog on your independent novel. The instructions have remained the same except for the question/answer portion since you will all be reading different books. The other requirements have been repeated below:

  • A one-paragraph STAARS analysis of some portion of the text (15 points)
  • A one-paragraph personal response through which you defend an original controlling idea or thesis using specific details cited from the text (10 points)
  • A rating out of 5 stars for your novel (5 points)*
Please bear in mind that while these discussions are taking place outside of class via this technology, your participation is a part of your course work. This means that conventions (spelling, grammar, punctuation) count and, while your tone can be informal and you may directly address your peers by name, you are expected to focus on the literature and refrain from making any personal comments about your peers and/or their posts.

As always, please review the instructions on the STAARS process that you have been given multiple times already this year. Especially review "Attitude" and the proper format for the commentary paragraph (TEAR). Please cite your evidence from the text properly with a page number in parentheses followed by a period, ex: "This is an in-text citation" (1).

Also, please be sure to comment on THIS POST rather than creating your own or commenting on one created by another student. That way, you can benefit from reading everyone's responses and it's all in one place when it comes time for me to harvest the comments for grading. As always, please see me with your questions or concerns.

Thank You,
Mrs. Siragusa

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Wednesday, March 9, 2011

_Perks_ Blog #2

By Tuesday 3/22, you need to post to this blog on The Perks of Being a Wallflower, Parts 3-5. The instructions, repeated below, have not changed:

  • A one-paragraph STAARS analysis of some portion of the text (15 points)
  • A one-paragraph personal response through which you defend an original controlling idea or thesis using specific details cited from the text (10 points)
  • A question for your peers that requires textual investigation to answer AND/OR a 3-5 sentence response to a peer's question that includes evidence from the text for support (5 points)
Please bear in mind that while these discussions are taking place outside of class via this technology, your participation is a part of your course work. This means that conventions (spelling, grammar, punctuation) count and, while your tone can be informal and you may directly address your peers by name, you are expected to focus on the literature and refrain from making any personal comments about your peers and/or their posts.

To resolve some issues from the first blog, please review the instructions on the STAARS process that you have been given multiple times already this year. Especially review "Attitude" and the proper format for the commentary paragraph. Please cite your evidence from the text properly with a page number in parentheses followed by a period, ex: "This is an in-text citation" (1).

Also, please be sure to comment on THIS POST rather than creating your own or commenting on one created by another student. That way, you can benefit from reading everyone's responses and it's all in one place when it comes time for me to harvest the comments for grading. As always, please see me with your questions or concerns.

Thank You,
Mrs. Siragusa

Tuesday, March 1, 2011

Perks of Being a Wallflower

Ruby Stettner
Mrs. Siragusa
1AC
Blog post/STAARS

S- Growing up
T- As children grow up they will often encounter feelings and situations that can be difficult for them to comprehend. Many times they will keep these encounters to themselves and try to understand them.
A- Adolescents
A- Sad, Confused, Compassionate
R- Characterization
S- “And I did. And I really hurt Sean. And then I started crying.” (pg. 7).
“ It’s like when you are excited about a girl and you see a couple holding hands, and you feel so happy for them. And other times you see the same couple, and they make you so mad. And all you want is to feel happy for them because you know that if you do, then it means your happy too.” (pg. 96).

The Perks of being a Wallflower by Stephen Chbosky is a bildungsrosman novel. It is an exploration of how as children grow up they will often encounter feelings and situations that can be difficult for them to comprehend. Many times they will keep these encounters to themselves and try to understand them. Throughout the novel Chbosky uses the literary technique characterization which is a method employed by the writer to help develop the character. When Charlie gets in a fight with another kid named Sean he starts to cry afterward because he feels bad about hurting Sean, “And I did. And I really hurt Sean. And then I started crying.” (pg. 7). The reader may find it odd that Charlie is the one crying when it was Sean who got a worse beating, this shows how Charlie feels things more deeply than others and how he is very compassionate towards others. Also because of the way the quote is stated the reader may get a sense that Charlie is confused as to why he is crying. Charlie often encounters conflicted feelings like on page 96 when he states that “It’s like when you are excited about a girl and you see a couple holding hands, and you feel so happy for them. And other times you see the same couple, and they make you so mad. And all you want is to feel happy for them because you know that if you do, then it means your happy too.” At one point he says that he feels happy for this couple and then he states that he is mad at this couple for no reason in particular. Also Charlie views that if you feel happy for others then you will be happy also. This is a perception on happiness that many people seem to ignore or at least not understand. Chbosky’s characterization of Charlie throughout the novel helps to give the reader a better understanding of what is going on in Charlie’s head and the reasons as to why Charlie makes certain decisions.

Question: Do you think Charlie realizes that many of the things that Sam and Patrick have introduced him to are often viewed as bad or things that you shouldn’t do?

Laura Wright's Perks of Being a Wallflower Blog

Laura Wright
Mrs. Siragusa
3/1/11
4AC

Subject: Friendship.

Theme: It always feels good to know that you have someone who is on your side that you can count on to help and talk to you if you need it.

Audience: Young adult, maturing teens.

Attitude: Happiness, Companionship, Saftey.

Rhetorical Strategy: Characterization.

Textual Evidence:
"In middle school, Susan was very fun to be around. She liked movies , and her brother Frank made her tapes of this great music that she shared with us. But over the summer she had her braces taken off, and she got a little taller and prittier and grew breasts. Now, she acts a lot dumber in the hallways especially when boys are around. And i think it's sad because Susan doesn't look as happy" (Pages 6-7).

"Mary Elizabeth is a very interesting person because she has a tattoo that symbolizes Buddhism and a belly button ring and wears her hair to make somebody mad, but when she's in charge of something, she acts like my dad when he comes home from a "long day" (Page 47).

Commentary:
The Author of The Perks of Being a Wallflower, Stephen Chbosky used the Rhetorical Strategy of Characterization throughout his novel. Characterization is the method used by a writer to develop a character. He uses this to develop a strong sense of the characters personalities and what their lives were truley like during their high school experiences. Chbosky explains how people change for both the better and for the worse, like how Susan did. Stephen makes it so that the readers are able to relate in a way with the feelings and events that occur throughout their years of high school. For example, Charlie states "The reason I wrote this letter is because I start high school tomorrow and i am really afraid of going" (Page 6). I believe everyone has some type of fear of going to their first day of Freshman year because they are unsure of what to expect and sometimes feel as though they may need to change to fit in.

TEAR:
The Novel The Perks of Being a Wallflower by Stephen Chbosky is bildungsrosman novel. It reassures the fact that it always feels good to know that you have someone who is on your side that you can count on to help and talk to you if you need it. Stephen uses the rhethorical device of Characterization to develop the Characters in the novel. When Charlie gets in a fight with Sean his bully, Charlie ends up beating him up and says"..And i did. And i really hurt Sean. And then i started crying" (Page 7). This shows how Charlie has done what he felt he had to do, but when it was all done and over with he felt very guilty and upset because it wasn't truley the kind of person he was. It also symbolizes how he feels sorry and doesn't like to hurt anyone. Characterization gives us a better, more clear explanation of what the Characters are like and a discription of them. This helps us to be able to relate to them and be able to feel with them if we have gone through some of the same changes in personaltities and events in our own high school years. Both The Perks of Being a Wallflower by Stephen Chbosky and The Catcher in the Rye by J.D. Salinger are great novels on the troubles and experiences of a teenager going though school and feeling some type of fear along the way. In The Catcher in the Rye Holden gets kicked out of his fourth straight school for failing and this is because he has had tough times in his life with his brother dying and it really effects his actions and how he applys himself. In The Perks of Being a Wallflower Charlie's Aunt Helen died in a Car Crash on his Brithday. This made it difficult for him at times throughout his freshman year because he felt as though he was to blame for her death.

My Question:
Why do you think Charlie begins to blame his Aunt Helens death on himself? What are some examples of what he begins to say about this? Use evidence from the text to support your answer.

Monday, February 28, 2011

Blog post thats not late

Henry Davignon
Mrs. Siragusa
1AC
Blog post/STAARS

S- Friendship
T- Stephen Chbosky exhibits the many different types of friendship around and with the main character, Charlie. He says there are many different types of it and some better than others.
A- open-minded, kind-hearted, thoughtful
A- Young Adults mainly, but suitable for more mature people as well
RS- Symbolism
Evidence- “The first present is going to be a mix tape. I just know that it should. I already have the songs picked and a theme. It’s called “One Winter.””
““Well why don’t you chip in with your sister and buy him that sweater?” Charlie replied, “ I don’t want to I want to buy him something.” … “ My sister decided to buy the sweater on her own.””

The Perks of being a Wallflower by Stephen Chbosky is a coming of age novel about a traumatized boy named Charlie. Chbosky makes great use of symbolism to enhance his subject of friendship in the novel. In the book Charlie talks about his Secret Santa present to Patrick saying, “The first present is going to be a mix tape. I just know that it should. I already have the songs picked and a theme. It’s called “One Winter.”” Charlie shows his true friendship for Patrick by making him a heartfelt mix tape , a symbol used throughout the book to express love (his sister’s boyfriend). Just the gift itself took actual knowledge of being his friend to justify each song. Next is Charlie Christmas shopping for his dad where he and his mom, ““Well why don’t you chip in with your sister and buy him that sweater?” Charlie replied, “I don’t want to I want to buy him something.” … “My sister decided to buy the sweater on her own.”” Charlie’s sister just wants to get a gift so that it can be over even though she has to pay a little extra. However she did buy a gift so however the love may be a little empty, it is still true. Charlie goes on to 4 different stores to find the right gift (the last episode of MASH) which brings back memories and is very loving of him. Chbosky uses all these different gifts and scenarios as different symbols of strength of love. Charlie’s gifts are deep and full of both meaning and love. His friendship is strong with those he knows. People like Charlie’s sister give gifts for the sake of giving which is very empty and symbolizes a less full friendship.

In this book, Charlie is faced with the worst problem in his childhood. He loses his best friend, his loving Aunt Helen, watches a girl get raped, and he walks in on his sister having sex. The book is showing how badly a kid will or will not be messed up based on a traumatic childhood. This is reinforced with the fact that Charlie is just now being exposed to normal social activities and adolescence. This makes the “experiment” pure because all the traumatic incidences happened as a kid, mostly. Then, the book will have some parenting lesson at the end of it to raise your kids good or they will be depressed teenagers who make bad decisions.

Would Charlie’s life be taking a different course if he was not trying to put himself out there and make friends like Sam and Patrick? Explain your answer.



Last minute FTW
Stephan Ouelette
Mrs. Siragusa
4ac
STAARS/TEARS


"S" Subject- Coming of age

"T" Theme- Throughout our lives we come across situations that change who we are and how we act. We understand more thoroughly when certain scenarios involve us and our lives can be altered for the better or worse.

"A" Attitude- Toleration, Understanding, Apprehensive, Anxious, Concerned

"A" Audience- Charlie is writing to anyone who seems to be older and more mature than himself. Chbosky is writing to the generations who are coming of age.

"R"- Characterization

"S" - The two real friends Charlie has in high school is Sam and Patrick. Since the suicide of his friend Michael,Charlie has not had anyone to befriend him. The characterization of Sam and Patrick respect Charlie and make him feel wanted. On page 22 Sam says:"Charlie has a Charlie-esque crush on me , Patrick." Normally if a young boy was to say intimate things to an older girl in high school usually the boy would be harassed verbally or physically. But Sam's characterization allowed us to see that instead of freaking out she was mature about the situation. Instead of making Charlie feel completely wrong and disrespected she comforted him about the things which are normal feelings to have. Patrick has felt some of the same feelings as Charlie has felt about being left out or purposely disregarded. On page 44 Brad says:"Man, I was so wasted. I don't remember a thing." This refers to the intimate relations between Patrick and Brad. Brad, to avoid tarnishing his reputation, blames his relations with Patrick on drugs and alcohol. Patrick's personal character sees Charlie as a lost soul that needs guidance. He doesn't want Charlie to feel the loneliness that he feels when he knows that Brad is only with him behind closed doors.

the perks of being a wallflower by Stephen Chbosky is a bildungsrosman novel. It focuses on the psychological and moral growth of a protagonist. Throughout our lives we come across situations that change who we are and how we act. We understand more thoroughly when certain scenarios involve us and our lives can be altered for the better or worse. The actions that Charlie encounters during these first 2 parts of this novel could be seen as common coming of age things. He deals with sex, drugs, and alcohol. Charlie is introduced to all of these things in a fast manner. The characterization of Charlie is that he is ignorant, awkward, and uneducated about some aspects of life. On page 36 Charlie's ignorance of homosexuality shows through. Patrick says:"Brad doesn't want people to know." Charlie returns with a "why?" Everyone knows that to be gay is disrespected in our society except for Charlie. He just doesn't understand that to be gay is to be socially unequal. Without Charlie and his nonchalant personality about these new life things helps increase the audiences realization that Charlie is just a lonely boy who has no guidance on such topics. It also shows that he will cling to every word a trusted person will tell him. Charlie in the perks of being a wallflower and Holden in The Catcher and the Rye have similar qualities. They both seek friendship. They both grief the lose of a person close to them. They both have awkward personalities which allow them to be seen as "different."

Question-
What is the deal with Charlie's identity kept a secret? It's not like he's a superhero. He tells us basically his whole life story, the most awkward things he has to say, but we will probably never know his full name.

Perks of Being a Wallflower STAARS

Tim Latina
Mrs. Siragusa
2/28/11
2AC

Subject - Growing up
Theme - As a child starts to go into adolescence he or she may start to experience new feelings. Good or bad many a child will feel new things.
Audience - Young Adult
Attitude - Confusion , grief
Rhetorical Strategy - characterization
Textual Evidence - "In the hallways, I see the girls wearing the guys' jackets and I think about the idea of property. And I wonder if anyone is really happy. I hope they are. I really hope they are." (pg 23 - 24)
"She would be alive today if she just bought me one present like everybody else. She would be alive if I were born on a day that didn't snow. I would do anything to make this go away." (pg 92)

The Perks of Being a Wallflower, a bildungsroman novel by Stephen Chbosky, deals with the coming of age of a young boy who has just stepped into high school and the new experiences he has in his life. We know all of the inner most thoughts and feelings of Charlie because the novel is set as a group of letters written to an unknown person. We may not know who this person is, but Charlie trusts him these feelings. Chbosky uses the rhetorical strategy of characterization to help better understand who Charlie is and what type of person he is. On pages 23 - 24 we see how Charlie feels with him saying " And I wonder if anyone is really happy. I hope they are. I really hope they are." From this we get the sense that Charlie doesn't know if people are really happy with what they do or if they just go along with what other people tell them and how they treat them. He wants to believe that people are happy but he can't accept the fact that they are. Another feeling the Charlie starts feeling is grief. We see this when he says "She would be alive if I were born on a day that didn't snow. I would do anything to make this go away." (pg 92). This quote that Charlie has massive amounts of grief in his life thinking that he is the cause for his aunts death. This helps to show that Charlie is very emotional and maybe even suicidal with what he is saying. With this Charlie is given more depth to his character. The biggest thing though is we learn why he gets emotional whenever he talks about his Aunt Helen and now we can why. Since he has thought this for so long, we can see why he is also removed a bit from society because of all the grief striking him. Charlie relates to Holden Caulfield in J.D. Salinger’s novel The Catcher in the Rye because both of them are removed from society and both have experienced the loss of someone they really loved in their life.

The novel, The Perks of Being a Wallflower, shows us the many experiences that a high school student might face during his transformation into adulthood. Since he is transforming from a child who is sheltered into an adult who has many freedoms, he is going into the stage of adolescence he has more freedoms than he had as a child. He starts to experience new things. When he goes to the Secret Santa party he tries brandy for the first time in his life. Now he didn't have to try it but he does any way to fit in. He could of easily declined it but he wants more freedoms now. Even though he has these more freedoms he doesn't have to partake in these activities. Even though he wants to do new things he doesn't have to and shouldn't feel like he has to either.

Question: Why is it that Bill has taken such an interest in Charlie? Also, why does he have Charlie write papers if they're not going into the grade book?

Perks of Being A Wallflower

Mark Nesbitt
Mrs. Siragusa
2/28/11
2AC

S-Friendship

T-Giving someone the gift of friendship can make all the difference in someone's life. In this case, Charlie is a lonely boy in need of some companionship to make it through his freshmen year. He is scared, and doesn't know anything about high school life. He just wants a friend. Sam and Patrick take that role.

A-Happy, companionship, something to look forward to, or just knowing someone is there for you.

A-Teens

R-Characterization

S-This quality in Sam and Patrick shine through when they want to be Charlie's friend. It shows they are nice people, and have kind hearts towards people seeking help, or in need of someone. On page 13, Patrick says: "Listen, you either call me Patrick, or you call me nothing." Patrick had his feelings hurt when kids were making fun of him, so he knows how it feels to be alone, or picked on. His experience made him want to not be mean to Charlie, and be his friend. He is basically acting on the statement do unto others as you would want others to do unto you. On page 22, Sam says: "Charlie has a Charlie-esque crush on me, Patrick." She is being nice about the creepy things Charlie just told her. Instead of being mean, and offended, she just brushed it off and was nice to Charlie.

the perks of being a wallflower is a billdungsroman novel. Throughout parts one and two, Charlie witnesses drugs, sex, alcohol use, and homosexuality. These are common high school/coming of age activities adolescents participate in, in order to fit it or explore what's out there. Charlie knows literally nothing about these activities, which is kind of cheesy and dumb I believe. Him learning about these activities for the first time, and viewing them with his own eyes, were sort of traumatic for him(controlling idea). He sees some of these activities taking place, and he doesn't know whether it is bad, or acceptable. He is a confused, and lost child. On page 31 it he says: "After a few minutes, the boy pushed the girls head down and she started to kiss his penis." Honestly? You seriously don't know what that is? You must be ignorant or something. Exactly my point of the cheesiness. But, he is seeing this and he does not know what to think of it. He just lets it happen, he thinks it is okay until his sister comes in. She calls him a pervert for letting it happen and watching. Charlie then knows it is a bad thing, and he is kind of traumatized. Also, on page 56 there is another example of how Charlie could possible be "traumatized", more of an influence i'd say. "My grandfather usually just complains about black people moving into the old neighborhood..." this can influence Charlie to not think very highly of black people. Since it is okay for his grandfather to talk that way about them, he thinks it is okay for himslef to. Charlie experiences traumatizing/influential events quite often for a freshmen. He must have an exciting life now. But anyways, all of his encounters have an affect on him that will show in his personality until he realizes they are bad.

My question: How does the little Christmas gathering at Patrick's house affect the way Charlie will act in his life now? What i'm trying to get at is that, how will the presents being passed around change Charlie's thinking about what is okay, and what isn't?

Thursday, February 3, 2011

Blog Instructions

Twice during your reading of The Perks of Being a Wallflower, you will be expected to post to this blog. Each post worth up to 30 points must include all of the following:

  • A one-paragraph STAARS analysis of some portion of the text (15 points)
  • A one-paragraph personal response through which you defend an original controlling idea or thesis using specific details cited from the text (10 points)
  • A question for your peers that requires textual investigation to answer AND/OR a 3-5 sentence response to a peer's question that includes evidence from the text for support (5 points)
Please bear in mind that while these discussions are taking place outside of class via this technology, your participation is a part of your course work. This means that conventions (spelling, grammar, punctuation) count and, while your tone can be informal and you may directly address your peers by name, you are expected to focus on the literature and refrain from making any personal comments about your peers and/or their posts.

Your first post, which should pertain to Parts 1 & 2 of the book, is due by Tuesday 3/1. Your second, on something from Parts 3-5, is due by Tuesday 3/22. There will be no exceptions to these deadlines.

I will be moderating the blog on a regular basis and am always available to answer your questions so please don't hesitate to ask for assistance!

Thank You,
Mrs. Siragusa

Friday, November 5, 2010

Tim Latina STAARS

Tim Latina

Subject-Hope

Theme-No matter what you have done and what you have been through there is always hope for you in the future.

Attitude-compassionate, caring, hopeful

Audience-Anyone

Rhetorical Strategy-Symbolism

Textual evidence-"But, on one side of the portal, and rooted almost at the threshold, was a wild rose-bush, covered, in the month of June, with its delicate gems, which might be imagined to offer their fragrance and fragile beauty to the prisoner as he went in, and to the condemned criminal as he came forth to his doom, in token that the deep heart of Nature could pity and be kind to him"(50).
"The rose-bush, by a strange chance, has been kept alive in history; but whether it had merely survived out of the stern old wilderness, so long after the fall of the gigantic pines and oaks that originally over-shadowed it..."(50)

In the historical fiction novel, The Scarlet Letter, by Nathaniel Hawthorne brings up the idea of hope. He says that no matter what you have done or what you have been through there is still hope for you. He puts this idea across by using symbolism. Hawthorne writes "...a wild rose-bush...to offer its fragrance and fragile beauty to the prisoner as he went in, and to the condemned criminal as he came to his doom"(50). When something happens to you, you can always know that there is something good and that there is hope waiting for you when you finish your ordeal. Hawthorne also writes that "The rose-bush, by a strange chance, has been kept alive in history; but whether it had merely survived out of the stern old wilderness, so long after the fall of the gigantic pines and oaks that originally over-shadowed it..."(50). What he means by this is that hope will outlive many of the things we hold dear to us. Hope outlives all other ideals we have and, with it, we should always be optimistic and look on the brighter sides of life All of this relates to The Crucible, by Arthur Miller, in the idea of the hangings. If they confess to doing witchcraft then they won't be hanged and can look forward to being alive and hope that things will improve after it is all done. Also if they don't confess and do get hanged then also their pain and suffering is over. In conclusion hope is always there for you and will outlast every other idea you hold dear to you, with everything looking up for you in the future.

An idea that Hawthorne has is that holding in secrets will destroy you. This is true because during the novel Dimmesdale held in the fact that he had a relationship with Hester making him sickly throughout the book. He was unhealthy throughout until he confessed to the town publicly making him feel extremely better about himself, soon dying afterwards because he released all of his secrets making him clean. This is also true in The Crucible. John was holding in his secret of his relationship with Abigail until he accidentally mentioned it to his wife which soon after caused his life to spiral out of control with his wife being accused of witchcraft and later having her lie in court to protect him.

In a response to Lillie's question I do believe that it can be justified. She thought her husband was dead and would never see him again. She was in grief and couldn't justify her actions. She was just way too upset to think.

Lillie Kenyon

Subject- commitment

Theme- If a commitment is broken then that person may feel ashamed and want to hide that the commitment had been broken. Some people hide their broken commitment as an attempt to protect the person who the commitment was broken with.

Attitude- Love, compassion, sacrifice

Audience-Anyone

Rhetorical Strategy-Symbolism

“…That SCARLET LETTER, so fantastically embroidered and illuminated upon her bosom. It had the effect of a spell, taking her out of the ordinary relations with humanity, and enclosing her in a sphere by herself” (56).

“…To stare into her face, and at the winking baby in her arms, and at the ignominious letter on her breast” (57).

In the novel, The Scarlet Letter, the author, Nathaniel Hawthorne, uses the rhetorical strategy of symbolism. Many themes are presented through the use of symbolism. Hawthorne writes, “…That SCARLET LETTER, so fantastically embroidered and illuminated upon her bosom. It had the effect of a spell, taking her out of the ordinary relations with humanity, and enclosing her in a sphere by herself” (56). If commitment is not honored, there may be consequences, such as how Hester Prynne broke her commitment to her husband when they were in separate countries, and Hester is now forced to wear the letter “A” on her clothes for adultery. Nathaniel Hawthorne also states, “…To stare into her face, and at the winking baby in her arms, and at the ignominious letter on her breast” (57). Hester’s child, Pearl, also reminds her of the commitment with her husband that she broke. Pearl is the child of the affair that she had, representing the broken commitment. This relates to the Crucible, by Arthur Miller because the girls who have accused innocent people of being witches have to see all these people dying and it’s a constant reminder of what they did, and Pearl and the “A” are constant reminders to Hester Prynne of her broken commitment.

Question:

Do you believe that it can be justified as to why Hester Prynne committed adultery considering her husband sent her to America and took so long to come to America himself? Why or why not?

Cody Didas STAARS for The Scarlet Letter

Note: It would not let me underline the names of books, therefore I italicized them.

S-Sinning

T-Although it may be difficult to admit to a sin, once admitted it can become an actual good thing as society may earn the respect back.

A-foreboding, harsh, critical

A-This would be directed toward anyone who has ever committed a sin and not opened up about it.

RS-Symbolism

Textual Evidence- "On the breast of her gown, in fine red cloth, surrounded with an elaborate embroidery and fantastic flourishes of gold-thread, appeared the letter A. It was so artistically done, and with so much fertility and gorgeous luxuriance of fancy, that it had all the effect of a last and fitting decoration to the apparel which she wore..." (page 55). "We impute it, therefore, solely to the disease in his own eye and heart, that the minister, looking upward to the zenith, beheld there the appearance of an immense letter,-the letter A,-marked out in lines of dull red light." (page 161)

Our class recently read The Scarlet Letter, a historical fiction book by Nathaniel Hawthorne that was 225 pages long. Hawthorne explains that although it may be difficult to admit to a sin, once the sin is admitted to then it may become a good thing as society may earn the respect back. He successfully uses symbolism throughout the book to explain this theme. "On the breast of her gown, in fine red cloth, surrounded with an elaborate embroidery and fantastic flourishes of gold-thread, appeared the letter A. It was so artistically done, and with so much fertility and gorgeous luxuriance of fancy, that it had all the effect of a last and fitting decoration to the apparel which she wore..." (page 55). This quote is the narrator explaining the letter on Hester's bosom in the very beginning of the novel. Throughout the novel the letter is used to symbolize various things such as adultery, able, and eventually as a symbol of strength. In the beginning of the novel it is looked at as a symbol of adultery by the townspeople as they scorn Hester Prynne for her sins. While Pearl Prynne is growing up, Hester lives secluded from society, yet is very involved within the community as she does community service and is the main seamstress within the community, turning the symbol of the letter into able. Eventually once the townspeople begin to respect Hester they look to the letter as a sign of Hester's strength, for overcoming everything she has been through. Another object symbolized is the meteor that is seen by Dimmesdale while on the scaffold. "We impute it, therefore, solely to the disease in his own eye and heart, that the minister, looking upward to the zenith, beheld there the appearance of an immense letter,-the letter A,- marked out in lines of dull red light" (page 161). Dimmesdale immediately interprets this as if he needs to wear a scarlet letter of his own as he believes that he is the equivalent of Hester, as he is the man she committed the adultery with. The few townspeople who see the meteor interpret it as a sign that the recently deceased Governor Winthrop has been taken by an angel to heaven. This shows how a certain object can symbolize different things for different people. Hawthorne's main intention was for the meteor to humble Dimmesdale and feel remorse for his sin.



Nathaniel Hawthorne says that although admitting to a sin maybe difficult, in the end you may benefit in The Scarlet Letter which is a historical fiction novel. "We impute it, therefore, solely to the diseas in his own eye and heart, that the minister, looking upward to the zenith, beheld there the appearance of an immense letter,-the letter A,-marked out in lines of dull red light" (page 161). The symbolism of the meteor enhances this passage because the reader can feel the way Dimmesdale feels as he realizes that he has remorse for what he has done. The Scarlet Letter, is alike The Crucible because they are set in the same time period and place and both deal with covered up adultery, in The Crucible John Proctor tries to keep his affair with Abigail out of the public eye for as long as possible, the same occurs in The Scarlet Letter between Dimmesdale and Hester.


Question: How come Hester does not allow Pearl to go and give her kiss to Dimmesdale in the crowd?

Thursday, November 4, 2010

STAARS

S- Subject- Sin
T- Theme- Sinning affects everyone involved and has a major impact either intentionally or unintentionally.
A- Attitude- sympathetic, thoughtful, straightforward
A- Audience- The author is writing for people who have faced a sin in their life and feels regret for what they did. Also people who feel trapped in a society where they're always feeling judged and who feel like they're alone.
R- Rhetorical - symbolism
S- Strategies

Textual Evidence- "Mother," said little Pearl, "the sunshine does not love you. It runs away and hides itself, because it is afraid of something on your bosom. Now see! There it is, playing, a good way off. Stand you here, and let me run and catch it. I am but a child. It will not flee from me, for I wear nothing on my bosom yet!" (p. 191)
"But before Mr. Dimmesdale had done speaking, a light gleamed far and wide over all the muffled sky." (p. 159)



Sinning affects everyone involved and has a major impact either intentionally or unintentionally is the theme that is showed in the novel "The Scarlet Letter" by Nathaniel Hawthorne. The genre of this novel is romantic and historical fiction. An example of symbolism in this novel would be the Scarlet Letter that Hester Prynne wears upon her breast. "Mother," said littler Pearl, "the sunshine does not love you. It runs away and hides itself, because it is afraid of something on your bosom. Now see! There it is, playing a good way off. Stand you here, and let me run and catch it. I am but a child. It will not flee from me, for I wear nothing on my bosom yet!" (p. 191). The Scarlet Letter is supposedly a symbol of shame but for Hester it is her identity. Her own child, Pearl, does not even recognize her without it on and she is a complete different person. The letter originally stands for adulterer but as time passes it starts to stand for able. Another example of symbolism would be, "But before Mr. Dimmesdale had done speaking, a light gleamed far and wide over all the muffled sky." (p. 159) The meteor that falls from the sky is symbolism because Dimmesdale sees it and thinks it traces out a letter "A" in the sky. The meteor implies that Dimmesdale should wear a mark of shame upon his chest just as Hester does. The rhetorical strategy, symbolism, enhances the meaning of the passage because it shows the reader what Dimmesdale is feeling and what it is compared to and really makes the reader connect more with the passage. Hawthorne is really good at making the reader connect with his writing and also he is really good at explaining what the characters are going through and what they are feeling. This novel would compare to the novel "The Crucible" by Arthur Miller. Both Proctor and Hester go through a period of shame in which they have to deal with the town looking down on them.

STAARS in TEAR format

Tommy Jenkins

2 A/C

STAARS in TEAR format

November 4th


S- Confession

T- The author talks about how confession influences the person and everyone else around them. The expectations of others make people do the right thing and confess the sins they have committed.

A-Selfish, Responsible,

A-The Author is writing to the people that have deceived someone and has a sin that is not yet confessed.

R-Metaphor

S-“A pure hand needs no glove to cover it! “Thank you, my good friend,” said the minister, gravely, but startled at heart; for so confused was his remembrance, that he had almost brought himself to look at the events of the past night as visionary. “Yes, it seems to be my glove. Indeed!” ” (pg 164)

“But this had been a sin of passion, nor even purpose. Since that wretched epoch, he had watched, with morbid zeal and minuteness, not his acts, - for those it was easy to arrange, - but each breath of emotion, and his every thought.” (pg 209)

In the historical fiction novel, The Scarlet Letter, by Nathan Hawthorne, confession of sins is brought out and is an important part of the novel, and overcoming the selfishness of themselves to admit to the mistakes they have made. In the quotation, “A pure hand needs no glove to cover it! “Thank you, my good friend,” said the minister, gravely, but startled at heart; for so confused was his remembrance, that he had almost brought himself to look at the events of the past night as visionary. “Yes, it seems to be my glove. Indeed!” ” (pg 164) They are referring to the sins of the people as the hand. If they have not done anything wrong, nothing will need to cover up for them because there is nothing to cover. But if a sin has been committed, they will do anything they need to hide it from other people. “But this had been a sin of passion, nor even purpose. Since that wretched epoch, he had watched, with morbid zeal and minuteness, not his acts, - for those it was easy to arrange, - but each breath of emotion, and his every thought.” (pg 209) People must go against their selfishness and confess to the sins that they have committed. Confession is also brought out in the book, The Crucible. The Scarlet Letterrefers to the letter if someone confesses and in The Crucible, they are sentence to imprisonment if they confess to being a witch or being part of the Devils doings. But they are sentenced to death if they do not confess to being a witch.


What would have happened to Pearl if Dimmesdale confessed to the sin when it happened?

Emma Gira
November 4

In response to Ruby's question:

If the town had known whose Pearl's father was all along, then I believe that Hester would have been hanged right away. Reverend Dimmesdale also would have either been banished and lost his job, or hanged along wiht Hester. Pearl would have probably been given to a different family to be raised, or looked at as an unpure, demon child and may have been killed with Hester. If Hester and Dimmesdale did die, they would have probably died happier, than they had in the novel because they would have died with the comfort of each other. Either way, if the father's identity had been revealed at the beginning of the novel, there would be no story.
Emma Gira
November 4

In the novel, a controlling idea which is displayed is the fact that when a person holds truths within themselves, it can physically and mentally destroy them. Throughout the story, Reverend Dimmesdale was very sickly. His depleting health was due to the strain that hiding the truth put on him. Once he told the truth, even just to Hester, life came back to his face immediately. "The excitement of Mr. Dimmesdale's feelings, as he returned from his interview with Hester, lent him unaccustomed physical energy" (225). When Dimmesdale confessed to the town, though, he died right after since his heart had been so weakened from having to bear his secret.
This idea can also be seen in Roger Chillingsworth. He had to hide the fact that he was really Hester's husband, and this secret, clearly, made him mentally unstable. "It may be. . . because I will not encounter the dishonor that besmirches the husband of a faithless woman. It may be for other reasons. Enough, it is my purpose to live and die unknown. Let, therefore, thy husband be to the world as one already dead, and to whom no tidings shall ever come. Recognize me not, by word, by sign, by look! Breathe not the secret, above all, to the man thou wottest of. Shouldst thou fail me in this, beware! His fame, his position, his life, will be in my hands. Beware!" (79-80). From this quote, it is evident that Chillingsworth is already going crazy. He threatens to kill the baby-daddy if his identity is ever revealed, and these secrets will ultimately lead to his demise.

Monday, November 1, 2010

Ruby Stettner
November 1
2AC

S: The Nature of Evil
T: Evil comes in innumerable forms. An evil soul thrives on the suffering of the inflicted. Often times, the worst of evils come from within.
A: Ironic, deceiving, selfish
A: Hawthorne is writing for anyone who is interested in puritan societies and the loose or strict associations of sin and evil.
R: Parallelism
S: "I, whom you behold in these black garments of the priesthood--I,
who ascend the sacred desk, and turn my pale face heavenward,
taking upon myself to hold communion in your behalf with the Most
High Omniscience--I, in whose daily life you discern the
sanctity of Enoch--I, whose footsteps, as you suppose, leave a
gleam along my earthly track, whereby the Pilgrims that shall
come after me may be guided to the regions of the blest--I, who
have laid the hand of baptism upon your children--I, who have
breathed the parting prayer over your dying friends, to whom the
Amen sounded faintly from a world which they had quitted--I,
your pastor, whom you so reverence and trust, am utterly a
pollution and a lie!" (Page 148)
“The angel and apostle of the coming
revelation must be a woman, indeed, but lofty, pure, and
beautiful, and wise; moreover, not through dusky grief, but the
ethereal medium of joy; and showing how sacred love should make
us happy, by the truest test of a life successful to such an end” (Page 274).

In the historical fiction book The Scarlet Letter, by Nathaniel Hawthorne a theme is that often times, the worst of evils come from within. Dimmesdale portrays this theme using parallelism in the following quote, "I, whom you behold in these black garments of the priesthood--I,
who ascend the sacred desk, and turn my pale face heavenward,
taking upon myself to hold communion in your behalf with the Most
High Omniscience--I, in whose daily life you discern the
sanctity of Enoch--I, whose footsteps, as you suppose, leave a
gleam along my earthly track, whereby the Pilgrims that shall
come after me may be guided to the regions of the blest--I, who
have laid the hand of baptism upon your children--I, who have
breathed the parting prayer over your dying friends, to whom the
Amen sounded faintly from a world which they had quitted--I,
your pastor, whom you so reverence and trust, am utterly a
pollution and a lie!" (Page 148)
The parallelism in this quote helps build suspense by creating an even pace for reading with frequent pauses. This repetitive parallel structure explodes into a confession at the end of the quote. Another book that shows the evil and torture that can come from within is The Crucible. Evil comes from within to torture Proctor after his affair with Abby leads to the demise of his wife.

How do you think the plot would have changed if Dimmesdale had confessed to having an affair with Hester from the start?

Sunday, October 31, 2010

Emma Gira
If Arthur Dimmesdale was not originally on the board that decided Hester's punishment for her sin, do you think anything would have happened differently? And if it would change how so?
Emma Gira
October 31

STAARS written in TEARS format

In the historical fiction novel, The Scarlet Letter, the author, Nathaniel Hawthorne discusses one major subject of confession. Nathaniel Hawthorne describes how the confession of sins, although hard to bear in the beginning, can ultimately save a person from a life of shame and depression. Confessing and displaying one's sin proudly and without embarrassment can cause others to eventually come to respect that person. In the novel confession is viewed as important, respectable and necesary. Hawthorne appears to be sending this message to any reader who may feel ashamed or eaten up inside due to an unconfessed sin. In the novel, Reverend Dimmesdale, appears to be sickly, but his apparent illness is due to the misery of hiding his secret for so many years and not confessing it with Hester. This is shown when the reverend meets Hester in the forest. "Happy are you, Hester, that wear the scarlet letter openly upon your bosom! Mine burns in secret! Thou little knowest what a relief it is, after the torment for seven years' cheat, to look into an eye that recognizes me for what i am!" (200).

English III Honors at Brockport High School: Blog Instructions

David Steves
27 October 2012
2 AC
STAARS for The Crucible

S: Sin
T: Doing a wrong deed can alter someone’s life and turn it to a different path. After years of trying to fix the wrongs in life, the “weight” of those faults is still carried on the back of that person.
A: Dark, foreboding, Victorian
A: Anyone who historical fiction
R: Foreshadowing
S: “The mother’s impassioned state had been the medium through which were transmitted to the unborn infant the rays of its moral life; and, however white and clear originally, they had taken the deep stains of crimson and gold, the fiery luster, the black shadow, and the untempered light of the intervening substance” (Page 94).
“Nay,” rejoined the young minister, putting his hand to his heart, with a flush of pain flitting over his brow, “were I worthier to walk there, I could be better content to toil here” (Page 126).

The Victorian novel The Crucible by Nathaniel Hawthorne is a Historical Fiction about Puritan life in New England in the late 1600’s. Hawthorne uses foreshadowing throughout the book to give the reader a sense of what is to come in the story. An example of this rhetorical strategy is, “The mother’s impassioned state had been the medium through which were transmitted to the unborn infant the rays of its moral life; and, however white and clear originally, they had taken the deep stains of crimson and gold, the fiery luster, the black shadow, and the untempered light of the intervening substance” (Page 94). This sentence is foreshadowing about Hester Prynne’s child, and how even though the baby did not commit adultery like her mother she is still “stained” by her mother’s sin. Pearl, Hester’s baby, was conceived from adultery which meant that she was not pure like the other children in the village. After the reader has taken this quote in the are filled with a sense of melancholy towards the little girl. This passage hints that later in life Pearl will still be known as being the child of an adulterer, and that reputation will never subside, it will be with her the rest of her life. Another passage that uses the rhetorical strategy is, “Nay,” rejoined the young minister, putting his hand to his heart, with a flush of pain flitting over his brow, “were I worthier to walk there, I could be better content to toil here” (Page 126). In the quote where the minister says, “Nay, were I worthier to walk there, I could be better content to toil here.” He is talking about if he knew that he had a very good chance of getting into heaven then he would not succumb to his ailment, and carry on helping people on earth. With the second part of the quote, “...putting his hand on his heart, with a flush of pain flitting over his brow...” it makes this quote another piece of foreshadowing that Hawthorne uses in the book. When the minister puts his hand over his heart and feeling pain at the mention of being pure enough to be given a place in heaven it shows that he knows inside that he is not completely pure. This foreshadows that the minister is keeping a dark secret that “in God’s eyes” makes him not worthy of heaven because he has not confessed his sin, and if he does then he will become an outcast of the village. When reading this quote a reader can feel a sense of forlornness because they can see that the young minister doesn’t believe that he is worthy of Heaven and has a secret that continues to afflict him. The Scarlet Letter is very similar to The Saint by Dan Abnett due to the dark and religious views. Another reason why these two books are similar is because both the authors use foreshadowing throughout the book to give hints to their readers.


I believe that Nathaniel Hawthorne uses foreshadowing throughout the book to hint at what will happen to the characters. In the book, Hawthorne never just comes out and says something, he constantly hints about things and doesn’t beat around the bush. An example of this would be, “Nay,” rejoined the young minister, putting his hand to his heart, with a flush of pain flitting over his brow, “were I worthier to walk there, I could be better content to toil here” (Page 126). In this part, Roger Chillingworth and Reverend Dimmsdale are talking and Chillingworth mentions about the minister will walk with God in the New Jerusalem but Dimmsdale has committed a sin that he has not openly repented. The only thing is, Hawthorne doesn’t just come out and say that, he keeps giving subtle hints as to why Reverend Dimmsdale acts the way he does. One of these subtle hints is when Dimmsdale places his hand over his heart; this hints that he is trying to hide something that should be there, like the scarlet letter that Hester Prynne wears. This is just one of the many foreshadows that Hawthorne uses throughout the book.


Question: Throughout the book, what is Pearl referenced to and why is she described that way?